Date: Saturday, July 3, 2004 11:30pm -0400
From: Rob Reilly
Thank you David.
Here are two questions from the audience:
8. This is my first book deal. I have never negotiated a
book deal before! How do I negotiate a contract? How can I find out more about
what things in the contract really mean, as opposed to what I, a layman, think
they mean? How can I find out what things are deal-breakers for the publisher?
What things that a publisher might put in a contract should be deal-breakers for
me? From: Pat McGee, Florida Institute of Technology
9. What does it take to get from a good, comprehensive
set of lecture notes for an introductory course (with many problems solved in detail,
many challenging issues discussed with examples) to a good textbook?
From: Alexander Ganago, University of Michigan
Date: Sat, 3 Jul 2004 11:07:59 -0700
From: David Fogel (dfogel@REDWIRE.NET)
8. On the question from Pat McGee: Pat, first congratulations on taking
the step to write a book and the first one is always the most challenging,
I think. Your next one will be challenging too, but for different reasons.
With regard to negotiating, my answer here is simply a reflection of my
own opinion, as opposed to matters of fact. For me, in looking at a book
deal, I try to identify the things that I find important to me personally
and ensure that the contract reflects those things. You absolutely must
understand everything that is in the contract. You are going to sign it,
after all. So if you are unclear about anything in the contract, the first
thing to do is request a clarification from the publisher. If that
suffices to explain the language and you feel comfortable with the
explanation, that's good. If you have any remaining doubts, you should
feel free to discuss the section in question with another person in
confidence, even to the point of asking an attorney for an opinion. I
believe you should engage an attorney only as a matter of last recourse
because in that case you are essentially spending your royalties, but
others may have a different opinion and want an attorney to review any
contract he or she signs. I cannot argue with that approach, but it is
costly. One of the things that a publisher may put in a contract that you
might want to watch for are rights of first refusal on new books. This
means that for any new book you are going to write, the publisher would
have an opportunity to bid on the book first. If you don't come to an
agreement in a period of time -- a few months usually -- then you are free
to market elsewhere. You may find this overly constrictive, or you may not
care. That's up to you. The publisher will probably include language in
the contract saying that you will not be able to publish a similar book
with a different publisher. That sort of noncompetitive clause is
perfectly rational for the publisher, and can be a deal-breaker if you
don't want to agree. Once you have multiple books written, you'll need to
ensure that any subsequent editions of earlier books are not excluded by
any language in a new contract with a different publisher. Royalties are
always important, but I think you'll find the deal-breakers in other
sections of the contract. If your book may have a large audience, you may
be appropriate in discussing a marketing strategy with the publisher and
having that strategy written into the contract in terms of publisher
support for you assisting in marketing (giving talks, appearances, etc.).
You would need to be willing to do those sorts of things, however. Please
follow up with any more specific concern, but I think the general answers
to your questions are: (1) if you are in doubt about anything in a
contract, first ask the publisher to clarify, and then if the answer is
not clear, ask a friend, or ultimately an attorney, and (2) expect to see
some language that would restrict you from writing a similar book for
another publisher.
9. On the question from Alexander Ganago: Alexander, this is a very good
question. It's not the way I have written my own books, so please keep
that in mind in reading my answer. As we all have experienced when we were
in undergraduate and graduate school, course notes can indeed be very
detailed. If so, I think that they would provide an excellent basis for
moving to a textbook because they provide the essential outline necessary
for completing the text. We have all experienced the other case, where
notes are not very detailed, or not put together in a coherent manner (at
least they didn't seem coherent!) and in that case, it might be better to
start over. A good textbook is not just a series of chapters, but rather a
series of interwoven chapters. Bringing the course notes alive into a
*good* textbook still requires all the effort that writing any textbook
requires once you know what material you want to discuss, in what order,
and how to tie it together. Bringing everything together into an
integrated whole is, for me, what is the last 10% of the writing process
and it takes much more than 10% of the effort. So overall, if you have
detailed notes, with good examples, and you've improved your notes over
several classes with feedback from the students, and you have a story to
tell, so to speak, then I think you have the basis for a potentially very
good course textbook. What you might do is write chapter 1 and use that
as a supplement in your next class and see what feedback the students have
for you. With textbooks, student feedback is critical. I hope my answer is
helpful.
-David.
Natural Selection, Inc.
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Date: Monday, July 5, 2004 11:52pm -0400
From: Rob Reilly
David hello,
There does not seem to be any more questions from the audience, so it
appears to be time to begin to close this discussion.
David, let me ask if you have any 'closing comments' to make?
-Rob- reilly@media.mit.edu
Date: Mon, 5 Jul 2004 23:17:01 -0700 (PDT)
From: dfogel@redwire.net
Thanks very much for the opportunity to spend some time with all of you. I
enjoyed and I hope the questions and answers were helpful. If anyone ever
has any questions regarding books, and in particular with IEEE
Press/Wiley, please don't hesitate to contact me directly. I'll be happy
to help as I'm able.
Regards,
David Fogel
Natural Selection, Inc.
3333 N. Torrey Pines Ct., Suite 200
La Jolla, CA 92037
USA
dfogel@natural-selection.com
Tuesday, July 6, 2004 22:45:10 -0400
From: Rob Reilly (reilly@media.mit.edu)
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